When a Finale is Disappointing…

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A war to the death. Empress Adele has launched a grand crusade against the vampire clans of the north. Prince Gareth, the vampire lord of Scotland, serves the Equatorian cause, fighting in the bloody trenches of France in his guise as the dashing Greyfriar. But the human armies are pinned down, battered by harsh weather and merciless attacks from vampire packs. To even the odds, Adele unleashes the power of her geomancy, a fearsome weapon capable of slaughtering vampires in vast numbers. However, the power she expends threatens her own life even as she questions the morality of such a weapon.  As the war turns ever bloodier and Adele is threatened by betrayal, Gareth faces a terrible choice. Their only hope is a desperate strike against the lord of the vampire clans–Gareth’s brother, Cesare. It is a gamble that could win the war or signal the final days of the Greyfriar. (from Goodreads)

***Possible spoilers you’ve been warned***

I don’t know what happened in this one. The first two books were excellent and fun to read. It got you looking forward to the final installment and wanting a nice close to the series. This one falls short. Drastically.

You get smidgens of action here and there but the bulk of the novel is Gareth and Adele having cheesy love sick conversation about their relationship and what the future holds for them. The setting changes throughout the book but they keep talking about the same bloody thing over and over again. It’s a bloody record that’s been scratched and you can’t turn it off.

Adele goes on the major pity party and gets whiny. I don’t know how she managed to pull this 360 when the first two books she was an excellent character to read. Now all of a sudden it’s “poor me” and “What about Gareth?” “Everybody is leaving me. Wah. Wah. Wah” Oh lordy Adele. Shut up. You’re an Empress. Act like it.

The geomancy theory was okay and interesting but there wasn’t much to it. Sure Adele, let’s destroy the vampire race right? okay good. Save humans. Yay. Oh wait your boyfriend is a vampire but hey! he’s okay with the massive genocide you’re doing. Yeah! that’s great! Thumbs up Gareth! we’re voting for you next time around!

The most disappointing factor of all was the inner vampire plotting was left to a few pages here and there and it lacked any substance. Cesare barely made an appearance and if he did it’s all about “Bwahhaah my plot is unfolding” several more scenes later: “Bwahahaha my plot is still unfolding” it’s like the villain who talks to much and doesn’t actually do the deed he’s supposed to do.

I was severely disappointed with this final book. It’s unfortunate to see such great characters come to a lackluster end.

I give it a 2 out of 10.

 

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